Thread:Kayem-san/@comment-11402229-20130907212534/@comment-8471655-20130914185637

Hmm, maybe I could help a bit with the plot too.

[NOTE: For some reason, I think it would make more sense if Packet City was near Malware City.]

"Maybe the apartment that Chris and W3 Source are in after Bobby leaves could be one of the places that Sugarboy and Saltguy try to hide in.

Also, maybe The Utensil Trio could have a major role and be the only things in the apartment that aren't possessed and be not haunted and try to assist Chris and W3 Source, only to be killed a few minutes later.

Meanwhile, after Saltguy is healed, he and Sugarboy are oddly transported into the university's very old and creepy murder basement and think it could be a good hiding place from the two bullies, entirely oblivious from the fact it contains creepy toy ghosts who control the goulishness of the apartment in Malware City and soon the college itself and controlling minds.

Afterwards, Saucebro and Pepperbro seem awfully suspicious of where Sugarboy and Saltguy are trying to hide at, so they decide to take a look at Chris and W3 Source's controlled apartment building, thinking they are there. However, they are taking held captive upon arrival, angrily thinking the two are responsible for this is a prank.

In The University of GigaQuack, Bobby gets rejected altogether and is sent to the basement shortly before the college goes haywire also. Bobby arrives to find the scary toy demon ghosts are controlling the state power (explaining the places being haunted) and controlling Saltguy and Sugarboy's minds to kill each other. The ghosts merge together, revealing the mysterious figure from before.

As Bobby finds out everything, everything goes from bad to worse as everyone's lives are at stake, and tries to stop the figure. After poorly imitating the Ghostbusters without effect, the figure uses Sugarboy and Saltguy to go after Bobby.

As Bobby is almost killed, the figure is slowly winning, and at Rock, Bobo, Wombo, Jim, Idiot Guy, Pepperdude, Saucebro, Chris, and W3 Source's final hour, Sugarboy and Saltguy become very loopy, by randomly switching back and forth from theirselves to possessed, and unknowingly pull the curtains and the figure shrivels up and disappears, undoing all the damage and transports everyone to the basement.

The others throw an honorary party for the two to celebrate, who are really confused. The college accept Bobby for who he is and asks him to stay, but get turned down because he misses his old life. Everyone returns home safe and sound and resume their normal lives.

And they all lived happily ever after. OR DO THEY?!

We see Fork's spirit (one of The Utensil Trio members who was previously murdered) rises up behind the state power settings and smirks darkly and rises down again.

TEH EMD"

I know it may not work out, but it's a suggestion that I think would make the plot work out better and tie in my characters well together in it and I think it would complete the story.

Would you say?