Talk:Invader Calamitous The Game/@comment-27014070-20160128005457

A lot can be done to make this article better.


 * 1) There is Title Case everywhere. Speaking Like This And Capitalising Every First Letter Is Annoying, And It's Even Against The Rules.
 * 2) Grammar mistakes. For example: "It Realy Horrible When Calamitous Is Hypnotised By Meekrobs And Kidnaping Every Irken Invader & NicktoonS Heroes So Zim & His Friends With New Irken Weapons Must Stop Calamitous Before He Wil Destroy Planet Irk" is filled with grammar mistakes.
 * 3) Plot needs work.
 * 4) Needs a bit more to it.

But overall, this article has potential.

>me giving constructive criticism to a 2012 article