Talk:The Adventures of Jakal and Cool Dude/@comment-27178869-20140925213845

Hmm, well if you want honest feedback then it's nothing I haven't seen before and it doesn't seem promising. I think it would be more interesting if some of these characters were less stereotypical.

And instead of yelling at Chrome, maybe you should calmly ask him why he doesn't like it and then try to improve this based on his as well my feedback.