Thread:Kayem-san/@comment-11402229-20130907212534/@comment-27178869-20130914191205

I'm okay with Packet City being near Malware City, but I feel like the Sugarboy characters are appearing rather arbitrarily. For instance, Saucebro and Pepperbro travel to an entirely different city and decide to check Bobby's apartment specifically, just to find two kids. It's kinda random. Also, what were The Utensil Trio doing in the apartment anyways?

Aside from the that stuff, a do like where your going with the plot, but I'm not a fan of the ending (I'm not talking about the Fork's spirit part), and some other details in the story.