Thread:Kayem-san/@comment-11402229-20130907212534/@comment-8471655-20130914210114

Knowledgeable Marksman wrote: I'm okay with Packet City being near Malware City, but I feel like the Sugarboy characters are appearing rather arbitrarily. For instance, Saucebro and Pepperbro travel to an entirely different city and decide to check Bobby's apartment specifically, just to find two kids. It's kinda random. Also, what were The Utensil Trio doing in the apartment anyways?

Aside from the that stuff, a do like where your going with the plot, but I'm not a fan of the ending (I'm not talking about the Fork's spirit part), and some other details in the story. Knife has intellectual high-tech equipment, and every now and then uses it to help in-need people in hot soup sometimes, only for Fork and Spoon to screw it up. Another reason why they came is because Fork was mad that their cable is out.

Also, Saltguy and Sugarboy accidentally pissed off Saucebro and Pepperdude to the point where they won't stop until, BAM! The old beating at the bloody corpse.