User blog:StrongBadHR90/Cringe Vault: World of John

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Well, now I am doing something on the wiki. World of John, and the movie, and the games, and anything related to it.

"It is created by [censored]  for the Nickelodeon. It is premiered on American Broadcasting Company on March 1, 1988,"

First off, you say it's for Nickelodeon, but it premiered on ABC.

 That makes no sense, at all. Second off, why do you say "American Broadcasting Company" that's not even proper grammar.

"witch the series of half-hour episodes"

Drinking game! Whenever you see grammar errors, mispelled words, or have literally NO IDEA as to what this guy is saying, take a drink. Drink count: 1

" Nickelodeon Movies, 20th Century FOX and Paramouth Pictures"

Two problems, FOX is not capitalized in this case, and it's Paramount. Drink count: 3

" a computer-animated adventure comedy film based on the series that was released in Januray 6, 1994"

A computer-animated comedy adventure film, like that hasn't been done a million times before, also in this case "in" is "on" and January is spelt wrong. Drink count: 5

" A video game was based in the animated series. In the originaly was developed by Gray Matter Inc. and published by,"

I can see atleast three errors, and one undeterminable phrase here. The first "in" is supposed to be "on", "originally" is mispelled, and the last comma isn't nessecary. Drink count: 9

" The game was released in North America on Agust 4, 1992 and in Europe on 1993"

By the end of this, I'll have alcohol poisoning. "August" is mispelled. And the last "on" is supposed to be "in". Drink count: 11

NOT DONE