Thread:TheNick4Guy/@comment-4707580-20160701050715

Hi TheNick4Guy I also have to tell you that I made an rewrite of some parts, however incorrectly Murdock from Gurrullers isn't a cop, you mean Sheriff Murdoch O'Brian don't you,

And his assitant is Officer Toby Boxhall, plus we have fewer characters, we got the slackers Police Sergeant Harris Daye and Junior Police Officer Morly Roobler, so as a joke TheNick4Guy I made it that Roobler uses a World War II US Army M3 Grease Gun for laughter although in US now adays we don't use Grease Guns now, plus we meet Police Captain Norman Morrison and Police Lieutenant Steve Heller, plus Sheriff Bert Bertram, and Junior Police Officer Cadet Albert Michal,

While writting gave it a little edit and also improved it more but made more sense, they use Colt Lawman pistols, Ruger P90, and Ruger MP-9 and Noveske CQB rifles, so in the story we wrote mroe to it when at Lombard Street the accident happens, we also made the part at the crash scene more well written and also when they go to Kiss Kiss Clue only, O'Brian, Boxhall, Morrison, Heller, Daye and Roobler go in to mistakenly arrest Kappus but until they confirm its' Porita, so what I wrote for it was by giving it a part where Police Captain Morrison meets up with Bessie Higgenbottom, and she and Morrison talk a small moment and he says he hopes someday to ask her to join another mission someday which she agrees to, and yeah so if a unwell written you could fix that so tell me if you like it better, :D 